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Feeling Nostalgic — A Year of Firsts

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When is the last time you did something for the first time? It’s been months since I saw this question posed on Twitter, but it’s never left me. Around two o’clock this morning, I found myself reflecting on many of the firsts that I’ve experienced in the last year. Some of them were fruits of labour, some were the seeds that came before the fruit, and some of them were pure synchronicity. Continue reading “Feeling Nostalgic — A Year of Firsts”

The Shiner’s War

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Men wielding oak clubs? Ladies of ill repute? Drunken disorder? Social chaos masterminded by one kingpin? It’s the stuff that Hollywood movies are made of — but it happened in Canada. As a matter of fact, this Wild West was playing out in Bytown when my Irish ancestors arrived in 1831. When they left the area eight years later, could they have been trying to escape the lawlessness of these events known as the Shiner’s War? Continue reading “The Shiner’s War”

So, I’m Irish

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So, I’m Irish. More accurately, I’m about 25% Irish. My maternal grandparents’ last name was Lindsay. Although I’ve known this my whole life, it’s only been in the past year that I’ve become curious about my forefathers and mothers.

Through a popular genealogy website and some internet research, I’ve been able to learn some interesting history. The documents and history I’ve been able to uncover so far has sparked my writer’s mind. Continue reading “So, I’m Irish”

When the Last Whistle Blows

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What plight awaits the town that relies on one central employer to sustain its economy?

Several small towns across North America know the answer to this question. They’ve experienced the years of bounty followed by the years of hardship after the last whistle blew and the company doors close . Continue reading “When the Last Whistle Blows”

Seeking Inspiration — Writer’s Brain + Gym = Creative Solutions

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A writer’s brain is a tornado of thoughts. Some scenes and stories remain trapped in the vortex, while other bits of dialogue and character details fling out at unpredictable times.

When I first began writing, I devoured article after article recommending  strategies to summon the writing fairies. The little winged wonders would only hover above the page, dropping words there if I graphed, plotted, and performed any other myriad of detailed steps. These time prescribed strategies didn’t fit me. I don’t think in a straight line. I think in a combination of frolicking sideways leaps, forward bounds, and pirouettes. Continue reading “Seeking Inspiration — Writer’s Brain + Gym = Creative Solutions”

Cello: A Voice to Love

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Cello music is a curative. It heals over the day’s wounds and calms the spirit. It speaks in low soothing tones or pleads through vibrato. It approaches with fleeting steps or storms about the room without apology. Its dulcet tones summon the imagination and make way for creativity. Continue reading “Cello: A Voice to Love”

Delving Deeper — The Cigar, the Lector and the Literature

Travel causes my writer’s mind to twirl around the possibilities of new stories and characters. My visit to St. Augustine, Florida was no exception. This beautiful historic town swells with cultural narrative, stunning architecture, and beautiful vistas.  My camera clicked again and again, documenting settings and references that impacted me. During that week, two unexpected characters pushed their way into my imagination. One of them has a connection to the cigars.

Photo credit: Gwen Tuinman, Flagler College, St. Augustine, Florida
Photo credit: Gwen Tuinman, Flagler College, St. Augustine, Florida

Upon returning home, I read Karen Harvey’s America’s First City: St. Augustine’s Historic Neighbourhoods and discovered that the town was once home to two different cigar manufacturers: The Carcaba Cigar Company and Martinez, Solla and Carcaba Cigar Mfg. This Cuban/Spanish influence intrigued me. The local library had a copy of the Pulitzer Prize winning Anna In The Tropics, by Nilo Cruz. Thisstory follows the rise and fall of a lector who reads Anna Karenina to the workers in a cigar factory located in an area in Ybor City, an area of Tampa, Florida . This furthered my curiosity and the search for information continued.

The concept of lectors originated in Cuba. A worker, usually a man, would volunteer to read for up to thirty minutes to entertain and inform their colleagues about local issues and political news.  Fellow workers would contribute a few coins to compensate the reader, known as a lector, as the time spent reading aloud was unpaid. The factory owners noted that productivity often increased during the reading period, so they encouraged the practice. As the length of reading  increased to four hour sessions, external candidates were invited to serve as lectors and the position evolved into a respected career.

Left Photo (Historic Martinez, Solla, and Carcaba Cigar Mfg, St. Augustine, Florida Photo by Gwen Tuinman) Right Photo: (Joacquita de la Llana, Lector, 1929, Ybor, Photo courtesy of USF-Tampa Special Collections)
Left Photo (Historic Martinez, Solla, and Carcaba Cigar Mfg, St. Augustine, Florida Photo by Gwen Tuinman) Right Photo: (Joacquita de la Llana, Lector, 1929, Ybor, Photo courtesy of USF-Tampa Special Collections)

In the early days of the lector, many cigar factory employees, both male and female, were illiterate. There was a great thirst for knowledge.  Lectors read novels determined by consensus. They also read poetry, nonfiction works, and newspapers. The people enjoyed hearing about the parallel universe of Les Miserable. They also favoured books by Zola, Dickens, and Tolstoy. Anarchist materials gained popularity as well.

Lectors were gifted orators; some readings might be best characterized as  dramatic performances. The men and women sat shoulder to shoulder in large open rooms, rolling cigars  by hand. The lectors’ voices needed to project to all corners of these spaces, so they read from atop a specially constructed  tribuna or platforms as seen the photographs below.

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Labour organization and political topics were of special interest to audiences. In fact, some lectors began writing their own material to rally the workers’ fervour for change and found themselves transformed into workplace leaders. Such activities led factory owners  to sever ties with their lectors.  Many workers arrived at work to find the platform removed; their lector never returned. Tempers ran hot. These abrupt changes contributed to strike actions that typically ended in favour of the factory owners.

The story of the lector ended around 1930 with the introduction of mechanized cigar production. Without amplification, the human voice could not be heard above the clamour of the machinery. As a note of interest, the Great Depression and increasing popularity of cigarettes adversely affected the cigar industry and pushed the lector into obsolescence.

Another piece of history gone up in smoke.

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Seeking Inspiration — Ingrid Ruthig: On the Weaving Together of Writers and Editors

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Accomplished and elegant. Supportive and completely relatable. These are words I use to describe the Ingrid Ruthig.

I  first met Ingrid last summer at a public reading event in our community.  We had a lovely discussion about our writing, after which  I reflected on the meticulous nature of her poetry.  Soon after, I visited her textwork art on display at The Whitby Station Gallery, where I discovered the creative influences of Ingrid’s architectural background. Months later, I came across an essay she’d written for a literary journal.  It spoke about the power of language and the importance of preserving its integrity. At the time, I found myself in need of an editor, and Ingrid was the obvious choice.

I’ve since learned that we share a common interest in genealogy.  In each of our family trees there is a several times great grandfather who had some manner of involvement in the textile industry.  The weaving together of words and images found in her visual work is a kind of ode to her ancestral history. “Writing is an exploration of the weft and warp of language,” Ingrid tells me over coffee.  She does have a wonderful way of expressing things.

 What follows is a recent discussion about the importance of language and relationship between writer and editor.

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Gwen: You have a very diverse skill set — writer, poet, visual artist, architect, and interviewer. How do your other interests inform your sensibilities as an editor?

 

Ingrid:  In a way they’re all part of the same equation. Editing is an integral part of creating, regardless of whether you’re making a poem, a painting, or a building. A broad knowledge base and a view of the big picture helps you do the job when you’re designing built form for people. You have to understand how they behave, live, and work, just as you have to know about art, physics, or construction techniques. Likewise, when I edit a piece of writing, those same things help me spot what is and what isn’t working, how parts of the story fit or don’t fit. I look at a phrase or paragraph, the dialogue, action, character, or chapter, and always question what it’s doing for the whole, because each component must serve a purpose. As I honed my skills first as architect, then as writer and artist, my skills as editor have similarly sharpened – they go hand in hand, in my view.

 

 

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Gwen: To what or to whom do you attribute your passion for words?

 

Ingrid:  It stems from understanding and appreciating that language allows us to achieve so much. I like getting the right words in the right order. I like their sound and how they can communicate ideas. They take us out of ourselves, extend ourselves. While I recall the moment as a child when I realized that, through books, I could learn or explore anything, I’d say the passion has been a product of a series of light bulbs coming on, rather than one. The English programme at my high school threw us into the deep end – we frequently tackled university-level material that other schools didn’t approach at all. So, those of us who didn’t sink instead discovered new shores, where authors like Joyce, Brontë, Hardy, and Greene did what they did. Later, in university, then in architectural practice, words were often powerful and tricky to command. Now, as both reader and writer, it’s exciting to find words that let us see the familiar and mundane in a new or different way.

 

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Gwen:  At what point should a writer consider seeking out an editor?

 

Ingrid: These days, as a result of budget and staff cuts and other changes in the publishing industry, much of the responsibility for ensuring a manuscript is as polished as possible falls upon the writer. In many cases that means having the manuscript edited prior to submitting it to a publisher, which means finding someone to do that work. In Durham Region, writers are fortunate in having the Writers’ Community of Durham Region (WCDR) available to provide advice or help direct them in their search for small critiquing groups, editorial assistance, etc. At some point along the way to a polished manuscript, every writer needs to step away from his/her work. You get too close to the forest of words to see it clearly, so letting someone else point out trees that need culling ultimately helps strengthen the forest.

 

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Gwen:  The writer and editor relationship can be a match made in heaven or hell.  What is your philosophy on building a positive collaboration?

 

Ingrid:  As with most collaborations, leaping before you look is ill-advised. If you’re thinking of hiring an editor on your own, take time to find one who shares your sensibility and goals. That doesn’t mean you should both feel the same way about everything. In fact, that might be detrimental, or at the very least, unproductive. However, a shared view of the work – in terms of direction, destination and how it can get there – is vital.
Here are some points for a writer to consider:
 
  • What kind of editor? Your choice of editor should also suit the genre or type of writing you write. So, do your homework.
  • What kind of edit? Decide what you need. Then find out who best suits those needs based on his/her background, experience, and services offered.
  • Do you ‘click’? Meet with a potential editor and find out. You’re not looking for a new chum – you’re looking for someone skilled, honest, and as keen to work on your project as you. In the end, s/he will be as invaluable to you as your best friend.
  • Can you take it? Be honest with yourself about whether or not you are prepared to accept criticism. Are you open to an unsentimental look at the writing and to being tough with it? If you aren’t, the effort will be frustrating for everyone involved. While the work comes from you and it’s difficult not to take things personally, it’s important to understand that good criticism isn’t directed at you – it should be about the work. And this leads me to another point . . .
    • Good or bad? Learn the difference between constructive and destructive criticism. Constructive criticism will always be about the writing; it will never be a personal attack. By the same token, if you only want compliments, this isn’t the way to go. A good editor will tell you what works and why, what doesn’t work and why, and then suggest how you might go about making the writing better as a whole.
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Gwen:  In your essay, Linkage”,  from the Ephemeris column of Encore Literary Magazine, you touched on “the uncertain evolution of books and art and information, amid the declining fundamentals of speech and clear communication”.  How do you see this affecting the relevance of editors?

 

Ingrid That’s an interesting, BIG question. And it’s a tough one to answer. I can’t really say how it might affect editors. One might imagine that freelancers will be in demand – but that’s presuming someone will care enough to hire them, and have the money to do so. Also, where editors were once mainly ‘in-house’, many are now freelance, hired on contract by publishers or directly by writers. As far as in-house editors go, they can’t – shouldn’t have to – solve an issue that not only originates at the public school level but is also systemic. Even now they’re stumbling. For example, in News, pressure to get stories online asap means there isn’t a great deal of time, if any, to edit. In the case of book publishing, resources in terms of time, budgets, and expertise, have also changed dramatically. Competition for attention grows as attention to detail wanes. And who’s actually paying attention, looking with a critical eye at the larger story, i.e. the big picture I mentioned earlier? If language fundamentals aren’t properly taught and no one cares or sees that we might be losing this inherently human gift, editors may well be standing on the sidelines with the remaining few of us who give a damn. Or maybe they’ll be a valuable asset. Right now, their work is in transition, like the work of so many of us.

 

(Photo credit: Greg Tjepkema)

 

“Writing is an exploration of the weft and warp of language.” — Ingrid Ruthig

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Dr. Quinn Medicine Woman: Lessons from the Townfolk

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I received a box set of Dr. Quinn Medicine Woman as  a  gift one Christmas about five years ago.  I confess that I’ve nearly watched the grooves right off the dvd’s.  After a “rough day at the office” I retreated to Dr. Quinn’s Colorado Springs.  Each episode featured three storylines (a primary and two relevant subplots) that explored an issue and ended with some kind of satisfying resolution.

The characters shared interesting histories and they each had a backstory that evoked empathy despite their sometimes bad behavior. As a writer, I strive to recognize such patterns. Now, I draft a short bio for each character I write about to ensure that they are three dimensional. I want write about characters who do more than drive a plot.

The characters in Dr. Quinn Medicine Woman grew and evolved throughout the six year series: they loved and lost; they succeeded and failed. Their journeys conveyed something beyond the story of a particular episode. What follows is the lesson I took from each character:

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Michaela — Be thankful for gutsy, educated women who press the boundaries of her gender.  They pave the road for those who follow. Let your conscience  guide you even though it recommends counterintuitive courses of action that inconvenience you. Take the higher road. Never discount the value of people who shake their fist at the ivory tower.  We need them.  They are the canary in the mineshaft. “Sometimes the only place for a just man is behind bars.” (Michaela quotes Henry David Thoreau.)

SullySweat-equity is not a new concept. There are many ways to live; you don’t need to be a sheep. In the end, a person’s word and good character is all he/she has. The truth will set you free. Tolerance equals not acceptance and actions speak louder than words.

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Matthew — Pride does goeth before a fall. Be willing to admit your weaknesses and accept help from others. You will grow, but it will take time. Anger alienates so allow yourself to feel it, then let it go and move on.

Brian — There is value in the innocence of children that must be preserved. We shouldn’t coddle our children or lower our expectations of them, but we shouldn’t burden them with adult worries. Childhood ends soon enough. Let them enjoy theirs.

Colleen — If you are a bright and capable woman, don’t hide it. A strong man will love you and the right people will appreciate you for who you are if you let it show. False love based on a pretend you falls away quickly. If you believe you can do something, you can.

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Dorothy — Being informed is important. Recording your feelings is important. A woman should never settle for a life of violence because she is told she deserves nothing more. Age doesn’t dictate capability; many adventures start late in life.

Cloud Dancing — Prejudice ends when we learn about other people’s culture. Spirituality looks different for different people, but it affords peace and calmness. Resilience is necessary in the face of change. Stewardship of the environment and conscious living have been important issues throughout history.

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Mr. Bray — A gruff exterior is often covering a soft interior. Never hold a grudge. Anger will eat away at you. There is no profit in taking advantage of others.

Jake — Forgiving is not forgetting, but it will allow you to move ahead with your life. Anger turned inward will tear you down.

The Reverend — The church is not the building; it’s the people in it.

Hank — Even the greatest villain has a backstory — some have a gentler side. Nurture the child within. There is no such thing as making a quick buck. Never sell your soul. Remember the golden rule.

Preston — You can’t live in someone else’s shadow. Social status and wealth are hollow without friends. No one cares how much you know, until they know how much you care.

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Horace — Common sense is important. Know how to keep a secret. Dependability is paramount. Accept help when people offer it; someday, you can return the favour.

Myra — Your profession is what you do; it’s not who you are. Your past doesn’t have to way you down. It can propel you forward.

Grace — Turn to friends it times of trouble, not away from them. Judge not.

Robert E. — Be a friend and trustworthy confidant. Quiet courage is stronger than bravado.

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Michaela, I’ll keep a fire burning at the homestead, just in case you drop by for a Sasparilla  and some girl talk.  We have a lot of catching up to do.

Is there a well crafter series that inspires you

or influences your writing?

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